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Writing Ads for the Internet


Writing your ad for an Internet audience

Ultimately, the most important aspect of any ad on the Internet is the ad copy--the subject and text which tell the reader what she needs to know. Unlike older methods, however, the Internet requires a slightly different approach to advertising for both individuals and enterprises.

The Subject Line

Most participants in a newsgroup only read a few of the articles posted. Usually, they scan a list of all the subject lines for articles that interest them. Because your ad is very dependent on this first contact with the reader, you should take the extra time to write a brief, informative, and effective subject line.

Basically, you need to present the most important information about your ad in 38 characters or less--the maximum allowed by some newsreaders. In your subject, you should specify what you are selling--items, manufacturers, styles, and sizes, where appropriate. If space is available, include your price and locality, but do not include hype. Also, don't make 30 posts in one newsgroup in order to give each item its name in lights--you'll lose people who don't appreciate your waste of bandwidth. Better is to write one article for each appropriate group, then be as specific as you can within the subject line. If your ad is a "Wanted" ad, the inclusion of "Wanted" somewhere in your subject is required.

Great subject lines:

The best subject lines include items, manufacturers, and, in some instances, sizes. For big items, items you don't want to ship, or if you are not in the U.S., include your city and/or country in the subject. Prices are also helpful if space allows.
Bose Speakers, Iron, Cherry Pitter
Nordica 770 Ski Boots, sz11, $200
Red '94 Camaro in Detroit
'67 Ford Prefect FS, Belgium
For large listings, group several similar items together, but don't overdo the number of articles, particularly with items under $50.
Article 1: Chairs, dining table, hutch FS
Article 2: Iron, vacuum, household misc FS
Article 3: Stereo, 19" TV, Bose speakers
Computer items require model numbers and more technical detail:
17" Mag 17DX NI .28dp monitor, $400
Gateway VL-Bus 486DX33, 8RAM/512HD
HP Laserjet 4P printer, $650
Commercial ads should include product lines, price, and conditions.
1000pr Nike shoes, export from US
Refurb Maxtor 212meg IDE HD $149
Overstock NEC 14"-20" monitors
Academic Microsoft,Borland software
Trading partner WTD, Hungary Cement
Visual C++ programming svcs available

Terrible subject lines

These two have plenty of space for more information.
Household items FS
Car for sale
Why are you different from all the others? Which languages can you program?
Freelance programming available
URLs make noisy, long subjects. Use the space to advertise instead.
Colorado Cumquats http://www.cumquat.com/~cumquats
Capitalized words are perceived as rude shouting; the same is true of strings of symbols. The wasted space won't help you sell your items.
******BOSE SPEAKERS******
BOSE SPEAKERS FOR SALE
---!!!!!bose speakers for sale!!!!!---
These items do not belong in the same group. The article should be split into 2.
DOS and MAC Software FS
Several articles have this same subject at any given time, and this subject provides no useful information about the service:
Make money from your computer...

Even if your ad is in the appropriate group, it will often be ignored just because of a lousy subject line. Why would they read yours, when 75 other messages have descriptive subjects?

The Ad Body

Now that you have a descriptive title, you need to write the body of your ad. The key to a good advertisement is the same as the subject. Keep it short, but include as much pertinent information as possible. For example, the best ads in the newsgroups usually fit on one screen--about 18 lines. In this space, you should include:

Occasionally, offerings will be so lengthy as to merit longer articles. If you have a long list of CDs, household goods, software, or computer hardware, try to put one item to a line, single-spaced. The fewer times a potential buyer has to scroll through the pages of your article, the more likely he is to see the items at the end of the list. Commercial users are subject to additional length restrictions.

One final note, please do not include binaries in your advertisements. Pictures of your advertised items are nice for potential browsers, but you must remember that your ad will be stored on a few thousand different news servers. That adds up to a lot of memory, enough that it is usually bad netiquette to post binaries to any groups that aren't specifically for that purpose. Also, many people have to download all of the articles in a group in order to read that group. Binaries cost heavily in transmission time. A better idea, if you have a picture available, is to mention it in your ad, and offer to send the binary by e-mail, uuencoded or MIMEd, to interested parties.

This tried-and-true format is the most successful way to advertise on the Usenet Marketplace. Usenet readers just want facts. Marketing hype and personal commentary is not a good idea because many people see it as wasteful--don't forget who is ultimately paying for the distribution and storage of your ad. If your article is more than a screenful, and you are only offering a few items, make your ad shorter. Otherwise, the majority of readers will simply ignore it.


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